Thundering Pines and Mentorship

~ Published February 5, 2022 ~

I want to apologize right from the start that this will be longer than my typical blog, but I love telling the story of how Thundering Pines came to be.

Thundering Pines marks a transition in my writing career. While I still love my earlier stories and characters, my writing took a giant leap forward with this novel. All authors will tell you they get better with time, but I was fortunate enough to have an experience that catapulted my writing forward.

It all began because of the pandemic. I’d dabbled at writing for years but hadn’t approached it with my normal tenacity. That changed as I looked for an escape from Covid. I’m a voracious learner, so once I put my mind to it I devoured every writing book I could find. That wasn’t enough. One evening, in my quest for more knowledge, I stumbled upon the GCLS Writing Academy. On a whim, I applied. The worst they could do is say no.

At the same time, I found that GCLS was holding a virtual conference, so I signed up. This is when I discovered Jae. I’d never read any of her books or even heard of her. Yes, I was living under a rock. My lesfic reading had been limited to a small handful of my go-to authors.

Jae’s intelligence, thoughtfulness, and passion for writing came through during her sessions. I found myself waiting for her to speak, wanting the other panelists to get on with their answer so it would be Jae’s turn again. Of course, I loved her accent too.

While watching the panel, I ordered a couple of her books. The first one I read was Perfect Rhythm, and I was hooked. I soon raced through Shaken to the Core followed by Just for Show. I loved them all and became a huge fan. In my wildest dreams, I never could have imagined that Jae would become a part of my life.

Soon after, news came that I was accepted into the GCLS Writing Academy. I started classes in September of 2020, and in October my first book Broken Not Shattered, was accepted by Sapphire Books. My writing career had finally begun.

With every class I learned something new, and my writing improved. All the classes were building to the point when we would be assigned a mentor. The mentor would read our latest manuscript and give us feedback. We were tasked with filling out a short questionnaire to help the instructors match us with a mentor.

One of the questions posed to us was, who would you like as a mentor. My strategic mind took over. How should I play this? Who wouldn’t want Jae as a mentor? All my friends in class became my rival. (Not really, but it sounds good for dramatic effect.) But truly, with eighteen of us in class there was bound to be competition for one of the best in the business.

I sat down to formulate my request. If I only chose Jae and didn’t get her the instructors would choose someone that I’d not have input into. If I submitted an alternate choice, they might give Jae to someone else. It didn’t take me long to decide to go big. Jae was the only name I submitted, but I didn’t stop there. I needed to sell myself, so I wrote a dissertation as to why Jae would be a great match for me and sent it off to my instructors.

Then I waited…and waited…and waited some more. At the end of March, the email introducing us to our mentors arrived. I still remember how excited and nervous I was before I worked up the nerve to open it. I went into my best philosophical mode, explaining to my wife why it would be okay if I didn’t get Jae. Right! I’m sure my wife didn’t buy it. I know I didn’t.

I took a deep breath and opened my email. JAE. IT WAS JAE! I’m not usually a fangirl, but I went full blown fangirl. I think I might have even squealed, but I’ll deny it if anyone asks.

Now the fun part starts, I get to actually work with Jae. I still remember getting her first email. She was so humble, introducing herself as if I might not know who she was. Little did she know that I’d strategically chosen her and written an essay to up my odds.

In my excitement, I hadn’t given much thought to the fact that she’d be reading my manuscript. One of the best in the business would be reading my rookie writing. Crap! I know, kinda silly since that’s the purpose of a mentorship. What if she hated it? What if it was so bad that she sent it back to me and told me she couldn’t even bring herself to read such drivel?

Too late to panic now, it was time to submit my manuscript. Then the waiting began. Every day I’d eagerly check my email. Jae must have known I’d be anxiously awaiting a response. She sent an update with two pictures from the journal she used to keep notes. Below is one of those photos.

Then the day finally arrived when I received her feedback. My first reaction was WOW! She’d done a complete content edit of the entire manuscript. Plus, she’d sent me thirty-eight type-written pages of notes. Was I slightly overwhelmed? I’d be lying if I said, no, but I’m known for my tenacity. I was ready for the challenge of improving my writing.

I still remember the funny moment during my next GCLS Writing Academy Zoom class. We were sharing how our mentoring experiences were going. When it came my turn, I told of my thirty-eight pages of notes from Jae. The look on my instructor’s face was priceless. Her eyes widened, and I swear she held her breath. Then I said, “It’s so awesome. I can’t believe how much feedback she’s given to help improve me.” I continued to gush on with enthusiasm. My instructor visibly relaxed once she discovered that the feedback hadn’t been ego crushing. She admitted that some students might be overwhelmed or discouraged. I assured her that I wasn’t.

I’d like to share a little from this thirty-eight-page letter. First, she explained the purpose of feedback. It is to improve the writer, so there will be more about what’s not working that what is working. She then went on to say the following:

“I’m German, and the German culture of giving feedback is very different from the American one. Neither of them is better or worse; they are just fundamentally different. We Germans prefer to give and receive feedback in a very direct, honest, and blunt way, which might come across as brutal to Americans. No sugar-coating for us! We also tend not to pile on praise, so if you are ever in need of a little ego boost, don’t call a German. LOL. But if a German praises you, you can be sure they really mean it and are not just trying to say something nice. So multiply that praise by ten to get the level of excitement a US American person would express 😊

I absolutely loved the line to multiply the praise by ten. Whenever I felt discouraged, my wife used that line on me. The rallying cry was, “multiple it times ten”. Jae’s explanation and humor set the tone for how I was able to read and absorb the rest of her letter.

Sure, I had lots of work to do, but she’d painstakingly gone over every point giving me concrete examples on how to improve my writing. I can’t possibly convey everything that was in the thirty-eight pages, but I can say by the end I felt like I’d attended a Masterclass. I still go back and reread sections of her feedback and have shared parts of it with my fellow GCLS classmates.

Of course, since I want everyone to read my book, I want to highlight some of the praise I received. And I must add, there were several times in my manuscript where Jae left a “LOL” or a “This made me laugh” comment. Taking it times ten, I envisioned Jae rolling around the floor in hysterics 😊. Okay, maybe that’s an exaggeration, but it still made me smile every time I made her laugh. The following is from Jae:

So, let’s start with a bit of that honest praise (and remember to multiply by ten to get the intended level of excitement!):

  • Dialogue & banter: What I enjoyed most was your dialogue, especially when you have Brianna and Dani banter and tease each other. They made me laugh out loud several times, and it made their relationship special. I loved that they keep up that style of communication even after they get together. It’s just their thing. Your sense of humor really shone through, and I enjoyed it immensely.

This is getting long, so I should start to wrap it up. There are so many more stories I could share. It will likely be one of the most memorable experiences of my writing career. I still have Jae sitting on my shoulder as I write, reminding me how to improve my craft. When I write something funny, I think of her and imagine that one day she will read it and laugh out loud.  In the end, I just hope I make her proud and execute everything she taught me. I want her to know that all the time and effort she put into me was worth it.

Here are a few more pictures.

I asked Jae if I could have the handwritten journals, and she sent them all the way from Germany.
Jae was gracious enough to do a Zoom call with me and my wife after the mentoring was over. Chumley also joined in and says she admires him since she still says hi to him whenever she writes.

I hope you check out Thundering Pines. And shoot me a line about how you feel about the firewood conversation 😊. It was one of the pieces I stubbornly left in, even though Jae really didn’t care about Dani’s favorite firewood. I for one find firewood fascinating!